Friday, October 16, 2009

Past Regrets

Past Regrets Copyright © 2009 Zora Delgado
(100 word flash fiction)



Disgusted, Evan threw both arms into the air. "Don’t turn away I’m talking. You’ve given me the cold shoulder for the past week."



Her eyes dropped. "I made a mistake."



"What does that mean? I thought we had something special - the trips, our morning love making routine..."



"Feelings change, Evan." Her eyes met his. "He’s my boss! What am I suppose to do?"



"Clever," he murmured.



"I don’t think this has anything to do..."



"Sure it does. I slept with his girlfriend so he sleeps with mine. Tonight, when you crawl into my father’s bed, tell him I said bravo."

4 comments:

Ofira Sephiroth October 17, 2009 10:21 AM  

Omg...that ending, I don't even know what to say.

C. R. Stone October 18, 2009 2:06 AM  

Ha, ha. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.

Larry October 24, 2009 3:05 AM  

Hello Ofira,

I love the past regrets you wrote you have some nice storys here . I wanted to stop bye and say thanks for the comment you left on my blog this morning. really I'll leave this comment short so I can read some more.

Thanks again
larry.

Goodbye

Ofira Sephiroth October 24, 2009 10:14 AM  

Thanks Larry. This particular story was written by C. R. Stone. We collaborate on this blog. Sometimes you can't really tell who's posting what..lol. Thanks for your comment on the stories.

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